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There's no poetry in death
Not a dark tunnel with light at the end
No Charon
No Hades
No Hell or Heaven

There's no poetry in blood
Just an essential human fluid
That's all;
No magic in it
No symbols
Nothing; it's just blood

Forgive me if I sound a bit cynic;
I can't help it.
There's no poetry in dying
Or in suffering
Or slitting your throat
Conjure not these things;
You don't have to die to be a poet.

There's no poetry in giving up on life
And dying a most painful death
(There is poetry in dying,
but only rarely in killing yourself)

There's no poetry in cutting your veins open
There's no poetry in letting your blood drip
There's no poetry in saying that it is

No poetry.
Just death.
Death setting free.
(After all, it's the remains of life that hurt)

Death is not vengeful.
Not evil.
Not desired.
Not punishing.
Not something you should crave.
There's no poetry in death.
©2004-2009 ~Rjan
:iconrjan:

Author's Comments

This has been formulating in my mind ever since I read some of the work of certain artists on Deviantart. It's just my statement about some things I've noticed, my own way to express my views.

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:iconjadester:
very good. I seriously doubt the people who need to read it (and take notice) will do so, though...
:iconnashua:
i loved that. I guess people myself included can be a bit melodramatic, sometimes we overlook the bigger picture and draw castles in the sky. Pain or suffering does not equal great art, i just hope there are more people out there with ur view. As for the poem itself. I cant say much about structure. But i genuinly liked the content. well done!


luvz

nash
:iconrjan:
Thank you for your kind words. Well this was originally with the context of it weighing heavy on the process. The form of it is somewhat not in my norm, but I don't think it's too bad...:O_o:

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Please be gentle.
:iconpolyhymnia:
Hee, yes, people on DA do like their death and destruction, don't they?

Nice :)

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'We're all lying in the gutter, but some of us are looking up at the stars.' - Oscar Wilde
:iconmetronomic:
Woo! Someone with the same sentiments as myself concerning angsty suicidal poetry, and elegant enough to put it into verse! Superb. Favouritifying immediately.

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Entering a universe of sanity and metronomic order with quite-mad coocoo newness...
:iconrjan:
Thanks. Very much appreciated :)

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Please be gentle.

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